Plot holes, logic tangles, conflicting character motivations... right now, a friend and I are about halfway through edits of a novel, as I've mentioned before, and I've noticed we're definitely running into snags. Nothing we can't fix, thankfully, and I'm glad we're noticing some elements that we maayyyybe didn't think all the way through in the first draft.... but that's what edits are for, right?
When this happens, my friend and I generally go back to the beginning of the plot/character backstories and work through what we've already revealed, and so far that's been OK for us.
We've also decided on a format where we do one chapter per character POV, so it's a 3-character rotating perspective - it gives us a lot to work with, which is great, but I'm noticing there's a couple chapters that could, quite honestly, probably be axed entirely, but it would mess up the entire format.
So, while it's a bit discouraging, it's also kind of neat to be able to tackle the plot and characters from a different point of view.
What are your strategies for untangling pieces of plot or details in your own writing? How do you feel about sticking to specific formats/formulas?
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That's a great question, for me I just write what I wanna write and trust that whoever likes it will come back haha. It's like real life for me; I've been told that I'm a lot of fun to be around and e...
Expand commentThat's a great question, for me I just write what I wanna write and trust that whoever likes it will come back haha. It's like real life for me; I've been told that I'm a lot of fun to be around and even though I don't personally get it I know that that means I'm doing something right haha. So I figure in most cases the best way to do it is to just be yourself. I don't imagine readers like to read something they know is fake, just like they don't like dealing with people they know are fake in real life.
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I agree completely Banafsheh Esmailzadeh! That is a wonderful mindset to have. Especially for the creative process.
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Thanks, Kat Spencer! Yeah my sense of self is tied quite closely to my creativity so it makes sense that there's overlap :) plus, y'know, as artists I do believe we're all still kids at heart and it's...
Expand commentThanks, Kat Spencer! Yeah my sense of self is tied quite closely to my creativity so it makes sense that there's overlap :) plus, y'know, as artists I do believe we're all still kids at heart and it's never a bad move to keep that in mind haha
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I just wrote and published my first book. I had sold about 15 copies on Amazon and all feedback had been that they love that I keep them wanting to read the next chapter. What I found is cliffhangers....
Expand commentI just wrote and published my first book. I had sold about 15 copies on Amazon and all feedback had been that they love that I keep them wanting to read the next chapter. What I found is cliffhangers. It’s also a story based on true events of my life and It seems to be taking off for me.
I hope one day to inspire others.
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Hello everyone. I come from a journalistic background; I believe that everyone has a story to tell. I hear stories every day, in the line at the grocery store, or waiting for a flight at the airport,...
Expand commentHello everyone. I come from a journalistic background; I believe that everyone has a story to tell. I hear stories every day, in the line at the grocery store, or waiting for a flight at the airport, or sitting next to someone on a plane or at a dinner party. I've always felt like it's my job to "find" the story and to write it. I've written two nonfiction books (both published) and as many screenplay adaptations. I've discovered that people like to tell their stories scene-by-scene---have you ever noticed? As they tell their stories, they often use all of their five senses: sight, hearing, touch, smell, and taste. A few storytellers embellish with a sixth sense as well. I like to capture each scene of a person's story in details. Then I like to play with the chronology. I like to begin with something that has already happened and something that is about to happen. Sometimes, this scene or chapter ends with what some may call a "cliff hanger." Other times, the scene or chapter ends with a question delivered in dialogue, or a thought someone was thinking. I've found that no one ever tells the bare naked truth right away. They bait us, tease us, and challenge us to say: "ask me what happened next?"