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BEAUREGARD (SCREENPLAY)
By David Joyner

GENRE: Horror, Comedy
LOGLINE:

In this spoof of Annabelle, married professors with their careers and family's future on the line handle their worst students in violent ways while under the influence of Satan's son.

Phil Clarke

First up, do you mean a spoof of the doll horror series? If so, it's Annabelle, just to be clear. Secondly, it's not clear why their careers and family's future on the line forces them to behave in this violent way. There's a disconnect here that needs to be resolved for the uninitiated to be "get" your story. If you'd like any further help with your logline, David, by all means message me. Best wishes.

David Joyner

Hi Phil: Thanks for the comments and the correcting the film name! I'll fix that. The doll is actually a give for their kid that they bought at a magic shop. - David

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