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ONCE UPON A TIME IN DISNEY
By Kevin Hager

GENRE: Adventure
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A former couple and Disney fans meet Mickey Mouse and help him defeat a villain destroying Disney. 

The inspiration came from Once Upon a Studio, Remembering, and how I got teary eyed with some of their works, in face I teary eyed thinking of the finale.

I also remember the Immersion Experience from Disney it was fun. 

SYNOPSIS:

ONCE UPON A TIME IN DISNEY

Nick Alexander and Adrina Fay used to date but broke up and went their separate ways year later they meet up again and while Adrina is going into fame as a singer songwriter while dating her partner the son of her manager, Nick has found work as an entertainer at Disney but is hoping to make his mark and play music. He hopes to ask Adrina to help him achieve this and, in the process, win her back, but she refuses. But he secretly invites her back into a sound stage and plays an Animation Immersion using new technology based on the Immersive Experience, when suddenly a fog appears with a light and suddenly, they are sucked into the walls.

When they come to, they look around at the cartoon surrounding and meet Mickey Mouse, at first, they think it’s a dream but realize it’s real. They join forces with Mickey to find a way home and learn that he and his friends are combating an entity called Lux and are destroying Disney’s characters, and helping the villains win. Nick and Adrina help Mickey and his friends save the characters and defeat the villains restoring the stories. Then they follow Lux to the 1900’s where they meet a young kid going through depression and Lux is hurting him. Nick and Adrina learn the kid’s name is Walt Disney, and the more Walt gives up the more the stories from his company fade away.

Nick, Adrina, and Mickey learn Lux is planning on having Disney give up so he can take over and corrupt and destroy all Disney had made and try to help him but to no avail. Then Nick comes up with a plan and take him to the future and show him Disney World, and the characters from Disney cartoons and movies, before revealing the man responsible for their creation was himself and with encouragement from Mickey and Minnie giving words of wisdom when Lux appears and reveals he is the embodiment of doubt and fear feeding off Disney because the happiness Disney brings and wants to erase it. Then he feeds off Nick and Adrina, Nick because he has doubts and giving up while Adrina had compromised her beliefs to get where she is. But Walt and Mickey give them encouragement to believe in who they are and their dreams. They stand up to Lux with the Disney heroes and Lux explodes into nothing, witnessed by his family who find out what is going on. Walt inspired by the legacy he will create the happiness and inspiration that he will inspire, realizing all the good he will do, and the family that will continue his work returns to his time renewed and tells the Disney heroes and his family he will always be a part of who they are and what they will become while Mickey acknowledges him as a father.

Nick and Adrina fall back in love with each other, as they bid far well to Mickey, he assures them that he and the others will always be part of who they are, and who they will become. Adrina drops her manager and boyfriend and exposes them with help from Nick and the two become partners and a couple and make music for Disney while using immersive technology to meet with Mickey and the others.

Kevin Hager

I really think this would be a good Disney movie.

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Vincent Turner

I do think this synopsis needs work. Good job so far. How would you pitch this?

Kevin Hager

To Disney, do you have or know anyone who could help?

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