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THE KILL CLAUSE
By Kevin Tavolaro & Kelly Tavolaro
After killing a legendary slasher, a kindhearted final girl inherits a curse that demands she claim ten victims of her own or suffer an unspeakable fate. But in a world filled with evil monsters, nobody said the victims need to be human.
Co-written by Kevin & Kelly Tavolaro
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Screenplay available on request.
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Unique spin on the Slasher sub-genre, @Kevin Tavolaro & Kelly Tavolaro. The Kill Clause sounds really interesting, but I'd like to know more about the story in the logline. I suggest adding the stakes and an adjective for the final girl (the main flaw she has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes her personality). The adjective will give the reader more insight into her character.
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Thanks, Maurice! We were just about to update the logline tonight with a bit more detail.
You're welcome, @Kevin Tavolaro & Kelly Tavolaro. Ok, great. I'm looking forward to watching this!
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