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BROKEN HEARTED
By Peter Bartels
A patient risks his life and a Texan lawyer his career, when they team up to hold a global drug company to account for their faulty heart valves.
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Based on the real life story of the writers recalled heart valve and his fight to hold the manufacturer accountable for the estimated death of up to one thousand patients worldwide.
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Thank you for the review Tasha.
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Even though it's just a sample I'm already invested in the story! I hope I don't come across as rude, but I would suggest switching the phrasing of the logline a bit to emphasize the fight between these heroes and the large corporation. From what I understand this is based on a real story, I would love to learn more about what happens both in the film and the real story.
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Thank you for the feedback George Xanthidis . The story is very much like Erin Brokovich, along with a number of other personal challenges at the time, Although the fight with the company was confronting the other personal challenges are also a key part of the story.
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Thank you for the rating Nate Rymer
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