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MINDY & THE IX
By Tiffany Gatto
Where the Magic School Bus meets Alice in Wonderland...
SYNOPSIS:
Mindy is a young gullible girl who gets catapulted from her home planet Earth to the mysterious planet of the "IX": a whimsical world inhabited by a few humans, the absent minded professor, the evil mayor of IX and rounded off by every type of "IX": bacterias, germs, critters and diseases both physical and mental. The Mindy and the "IX" series has been created to teach children about health and wellness in a safe and relatable format.
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Unique series, @Tiffany! It's definitely "Magic School Bus meets Alice in Wonderland"! I want to watch it!
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