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PEBBLES ON THE BEACH
By Patricia Poulos

GENRE: Romance, Family
LOGLINE:

Kicking a pebble along a magical beach a school-boy becomes mesmerized by an apparition which materializes into the girl of his dreams.

SYNOPSIS:

Placed at an English countryside, it is a story of love-at-first-sight which endures to adulthood.

David is on holiday from school. His vacation is spent with his Uncle John in a mansion on the hill.

Dressed in school uniform, David bides his time away kicking Pebbles along a secluded magical beach.

As the pristine waters illuminate their contents David aimlessly kicks the colourful Pebbles through the ebb and flow of the tide.

He stops. Lifts his head.

His eyes glazed, he greets the mist before him. Gradually, an apparition appears. Then, just as quickly disintegrates. The mist clears to a voice.

A beautiful young girl with flowing blonde hair is before him. She introduces herself as Beth.

In a few short minutes Beth steals his heart, lures him into a magical cave and leaves him mesmerized. On leaving, he vows to return.

As the years pass and adulthood is upon them, their puppy-love endures the test of time.

Along the magical beach that brought them together, Beth accepts David's proposal of marriage... "of course, silly."

Nathaniel Baker

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