An anxious and insecure woman’s life turns upside down and plunged into danger when she finds out that she’s the last of her kind of the Amazon warriors of myth.
Hello Iannis. That's a very interesting concept. Just a humble suggestion for the logline: "When an anxious and insecure woman finds out she’s the last of her kind of Amazon warriors of myth, her life turns upside down as she gets embroiled in a world of intrigue and espionage."
I like your logline suggestion, Marcos Fizzotti. I would change some things though: "When an anxious, insecure woman finds out she’s the last of mythical Amazon warriors, she becomes embroiled in a world of intrigue and espionage where she __________ (the series goal)."
Also, how does she become embroiled in a world of intrigue and espionage, Iannis Aliferis? Does the NIS hire her?
I think the problem lies in trying to fit two major events into two lines of the logline when I should just be focusing on the main event alone. I might not have come to this conclusion without your feedback, so thank you Maurice Vaughan and @marcosfizzoti!
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Hello Iannis. That's a very interesting concept. Just a humble suggestion for the logline: "When an anxious and insecure woman finds out she’s the last of her kind of Amazon warriors of myth, her life turns upside down as she gets embroiled in a world of intrigue and espionage."
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I like your logline suggestion, Marcos Fizzotti. I would change some things though: "When an anxious, insecure woman finds out she’s the last of mythical Amazon warriors, she becomes embroiled in a world of intrigue and espionage where she __________ (the series goal)."
Also, how does she become embroiled in a world of intrigue and espionage, Iannis Aliferis? Does the NIS hire her?
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Sorry guys, just realized your comments now. Thank you so much for your suggestions, they are both really good and much welcome! :)
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I think the problem lies in trying to fit two major events into two lines of the logline when I should just be focusing on the main event alone. I might not have come to this conclusion without your feedback, so thank you Maurice Vaughan and @marcosfizzoti!
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You're welcome, Iannis.
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You're welcome, Iannis Aliferis. I agree. Try to focus on the main event in the logline.
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