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By Nicholas P
After being stalked by an online predator, a college girl stays online to save her boyfriend who has been abducted by the same person during her live stream. To save him, she must stay online for twenty-four hours or he dies.
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Interesting concept, Nicholas P, but I think the logline needs some work. Try this: "After ______ (something happens/the inciting incident), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) tries to _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
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