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A group of teens are left stranded at a campsite and must overcome the mind games being played in the group, in order to survive the weekend as they're hunted by a psychopathic killer.
SYNOPSIS:
Serial killer Reese Matthews is offered a job to work at a camp by the warden at his prison. On the day of his transfer, Reese kills both the guards and drives the van to the same camp to await the campers to arrive. As the killer is about to enter the cabin, he is stopped by a state trooper and shot. He takes Reese and puts him into his cruiser. While driving, Reese causes an accident on the highway, which causes an explosion. The trooper dead and Reese's body missing, the real terror begins for three juvenile delinquents. Rosie, Kaleb and Lorelai are all from different backgrounds. Kaleb, a teenage boy serving a year for nearly killing his mother's boyfriend. Rosie, a girl serving time for brutally beating a younger girl. Lorelai, a girl serving time for shoplifting.
Left with no adult supervision after getting on the bus, the three teenagers enter the cabin and make themselves at home. Alongside of the highway, a woman is pulled over and killed for her car.
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Hey! This idea is so fun - I have on TEENY thought. Is there a different way to go into the second sentence? Or combine the two sentence into one? You have this great momentum with the first sentence, and then "Later" kind of takes out that momentum. Maybe it's something like "A group of teens are left stranded at a campsite and must overcome the mind games being played in the group in order to survive the weekend as they're hunted by a psychopathic killer." -- My version is not it, and I haven't read your script so it might not be accurate, but just an idea
Consider it done Emily J
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Nicholas P Don't be afraid to play with it some more! There may be an even better version that's in your voice!
Thank you Emily J
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