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WILD & CRAZY
By Nicholas P
After being abandoned, a streetwise homeless girl fights with high school jocks and hustles gullible tourists out of their money to make it day by day.
WILD & CRAZY
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Interesting concept, Nicholas P!
Your logline's almost solid. I just have three suggestions:
1. Add the inciting incident at the start of the logline. Something like: After being abandoned, a streetwise homeless girl fights....
2. Remove the comma after "jocks."
3. Add a S to "tourist."
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