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A WEEKEND WITH GRANDPA
By John Mezes
When a grieving ex-marine grandfather takes his two estranged grandkids on a camping trip to reconnect and heal, they encounter a malevolent entity that feeds on souls, forcing them to confront their inner demons and fight for their survival.
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Hey, John Mezes. After reading your logline again, I suggest adding a comma after "heal." I don't think you need "in the wilderness" since you wrote "camping trip." I also suggest changing "fight for their survival" to "fight for survival."
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Thank you for the notes, Maurice. I appreciate them, and thank you everyone who rated my logline.
You're welcome, John Mezes. Unique concept.