The good and bad of using AI for a 'Pitch Package'. Good - Structure and Formatting. Bad - Content accuracy.
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The good and bad of using AI for a 'Pitch Package'. Good - Structure and Formatting. Bad - Content accuracy.
“Hi Stage 32 fam. I’m Charmane Wedderburn
I’m in pre-production for my first short film as writer/director. A producer from my Verein is asking me to pay the majority of the budget plus give him an upfront fee, while still splitting ownership 50/50.
Is this normal in short film production?
If the wri...
Expand postMuddy. If it's your short and you are financing it, then you can hire a (physical) producer to help during the production or production services and pay them for their work but they would not be entit...
Expand comment“Thanks, Geoffroy — makes sense. In my case, since I’m carrying the financing and creative, it feels more like a hire situation than ownership. That’s where my instinct was leaning too.”
“Kay, thank you — that’s crystal clear. You’re right: for a short, it makes much more sense to hire a producer for specific deliverables than to hand over ownership. That helps me stand my ground.”
“Big thanks to everyone who weighed in — this really cleared the fog. Here’s where I stand: I wrote it, I’m financing it, so I own it. Period. Any producer on this project will be brought on as a hire...
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More than ⅔ of the top 100 Films and Television series last year were based on IP. While Intellectual Property can be spread across more than a dozen categories, typically the foundation for a project is a book more often than anything else. In a business where financing is harder and harder to asse...
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Wow, what a talent. It’s a sad day for filmmaking.
As a kid, he was a hero for me, with ‘Butch Cassidy and the Sundance Kid’, ‘All the President’s Men’ and ‘3 Days of the Condor’.
He won an Oscar for directing ‘Ordinary People’ and was of course, the founder of the Sundance Film Festival. He has left...
Expand postMy condolences to his family and friends. My favorite Robert Redford role is Lieutenant General Eugene Irwin in The Last Castle, Geoff Hall. I've been meaning to watch Butch Cassidy and the Sundance K...
Expand commentBishop, leader of a ragtag group of intelligence specialists in the comedy-drama "Sneakers," master thief Dortmunder in the crime comedy "The Hot Rock," and his tour-de-force solo performance as Our M...
Expand commentA friend of mine just mentioned this Geoff Hall - so sorry to hear. So many movies that I loved him in that it's hard to pick one. I did love "Sneakers".
Maurice Vaughan 5 you’ve got to see it, Maurice. It’s a great film and the chemistry between Robert Redford and Paul Newman is fantastic!...
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Is your feature film or television series concept fully developed but hasn’t sold to the perfect company or network? Is your script polished and ready for production but not grabbing the attention of the right producer or executive?
While many writers and filmmakers believe that developing a project...
Expand postHey, Michael! Sorry I took so long to get back to you, my apologies. Hope you're having a great day!Truly a wonderful question — I’m happy to help explain more about MIPCOM.
MIPCOM is one of the world’...
Expand commentHi, LaDonna! I completely understand the challenge of finding producers and executive directors who are genuinely interested in your genre of screenplays. If you’d like some recommendations, helpful t...
Expand commentHey all, so excited to get going with the lab with the incredible Alexia! If you would like to sign up or have any questions, please email me at edu@stage32.com
Hi Stage 32 fam. I'm Charmane, a Jamaican-Swiss writer stepping into directing for the very first time.
This October, I'll be on set for my debut short film - nervous, excited, and ready to learn! Would love to hear from fellow filmmakers; what's the one piece of advice you wish you had before direc...
Expand postFind the right DoP. Someone who is experienced, understands your vision and is willing to help you as a first time director. Massive element. Good luck!
You're welcome, Charmane Wedderburn. Can't wait to see your film! And one tip is take behind-the-scenes photos and videos you could use for promo material.
Hello all, I was thinking about sharing with you how important prep is for any filming day to be completed succesfully. The best way to do this, is by example. So I am jumping right in...We had to film a scene which more or less, was this: "in a fishing boat, in the middle of the sea, two women are...
Expand postGREAT work with your planning! Also, kudos that you attempted work around a boat - water may be the most dangerous to work with! The fact that you had a 3rd boat with all emergency personell tells me...
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Hello Creators, I’m looking for feedback on the following elements of my concept. This is a high-concept feature (or limited series) about a UFO that begins a countdown, releasing one world-ending monster at a time. I’d love your thoughts on these areas:
Logline:
After a UFO disables global communic...
Expand postDesiree Middleton Yes, Arrival is actually one of the key comparables I’ve been working with—definitely had that in mind while shaping the tone and structure. I’ve also been drawing from NOPE, Battle...
Expand commentAppreciate you, Oleksandr Shcherbyna—great insight all around. I’m aiming to keep things grounded in tension and clever problem-solving, not just big spectacle. The challenge has been balancing escala...
Expand commentThanks so much, Paul Rivers—that means a lot to hear. I’ve been building 5,4,3,2,1 as something I’d want to experience on the big screen too, so knowing it resonated with you like that really pushes m...
Expand commentMaurice Vaughan 5 Desiree Middleton Paul Rivers What do you think of a flying swarm of jellyfish, like box jellyfish or man o’ war, drifting like a poisonous fog, their see-through bodies glowing with...
Expand commentThat'd be terrifying, but it'd look incredible on screen, Dwayne Williams 2!
Location sets the tone for your story.
In this post, you can find 5 Tips for Choosing the Perfect Shooting Location.
Keep these tips in mind:
1. Scout Early: Secure your spot before your competitors do.
2. Check Accessibility: Ensure your #crew and #equipment can reach the site.
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Expand postGreat tips, Vincent Weberink! I look at photos and videos of locations online when I outline a script that I'm going to write. It helps me think of scenes and ideas....
Expand commentI mean... just to be able to visit for a few months as I'm filming it? LOL Scotland, Japan, Korea, Brazil, Chile, Iceland - just to name a few!
Ooo, great tips, Vincent Weberink ! Also - just so ya kno...
Expand commentVincent Weberink It depends.... if the goal is fine wine and exotic women (I meant exotic locale); you can’t go wrong in some parts of Italy and France. I heard the CRAZY HORSE in Paris, France does i...
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I directed and produced a suspense short and a horror short.
Furthermore I produced a documentary (which premiered in cinema last week in The Netherlands).
I was thinking about a strange thing concerning fiction movies. Do you recognize this? That you enjoy watching movies you wouldn't want to make y...
Expand postCongratulations on directing and producing the shorts, Frank Van Der Meijden! Congratulations on your documentary premiering in cinema last week! I enjoy watching movies I wouldn’t usually write....
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AI is good for technical matters, not creative matters. When referring to AI, most people are talking about things like ChatGPT or Gemini, for textual work, or Runway and others for graphic work. The...
Expand commentAI is good for technical matters, not creative matters. When referring to AI, most people are talking about things like ChatGPT or Gemini, for textual work, or Runway and others for graphic work. The former are mostly trained on LLMs (Large Language Models) and are statistical exercises. They are not talking or thinking, they are matching statistically probably words and phrases which might follow others. They do not process data correctly much of the time. You have to be quite sophisticated in the actual area of research and in dealing with AI itself to be able to get meaningful and accurate data. For the same statistical reason - no writing it produces is going to be any more than mediocre. The models don't allow for anything better,
From my perspective as a producer, regarding graphics and it's use in pitch packages ,consider: 1. Generative AI (runway, et al) is a consumer level product which works on a statistical base that, by definition, can at best produce mediocre results. It is not intended to produce professional, commercial quality work, and it does not. 2. You will find most AI has a specific look, similar to most other AI. This is because they were all trained on similar datasets. They cannot create something that does not already exist. They can only adapt what does exist, in a statistical average method. 3. Creators should be paying attention: audiences have quickly and increasingly become hostile to AI. You can find the term 'AI slop" from TikTok to private blogs to other platforms. 4. Youtube, and other platforms now require you to reveal the use of AI in your project. This is so they can help users avoid you. 5. You cannot unsee a graphic in your pitch. So if it is AI generated, ordinary, overused or just plain reveals you couldn't be bothered to spend the time to create something good, that message is seen and cannot be avoided. In law, before a jury, we will sometimes refer to inadmissible evidence - even though the jury is supposed to ignore it. We do that because we know the jury cannot unsee or unhear something. It will be taken into account no matter what else applies.
Thanks,
I think we are essentially saying the same thing.
I use it as a starting point with layouts and structure, but definitely not for content. I'm talking about press releases and one-page pitches.
W...
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I think we are essentially saying the same thing.
I use it as a starting point with layouts and structure, but definitely not for content. I'm talking about press releases and one-page pitches.
We have utilized AI to generate front-page graphic ideas for our clients. But there are telltale mistakes with graphics, like people with six fingers.
The current (not talked about) issue with AI right now is that it's way too homogenous and overly effusive. Not that positivity is a bad thing, but that there's a specific pattern or rhythm to AI gene...
Expand commentThe current (not talked about) issue with AI right now is that it's way too homogenous and overly effusive. Not that positivity is a bad thing, but that there's a specific pattern or rhythm to AI generated writing that once you (as a reader/audience of materials) see it, you can't unsee it and it's an incredibly big turn off. AI simply does not dig deep enough to express true emotion and feeling. Instead it paints over the feeling parts with generic descriptors to create the illusion of feeling, which makes AI written material hard to really connect with. This is all very hifalutin, but the optics once a reader/audience realizes materials were written by AI works heavily against you. It's only been a short while, but people who evaluate creative projects for a living are all tired of it already. I've had this discussion with dozens of working execs recently, and it really comes down to a fundamental point. If someone is reading and examining your project to see if it's something they want to invest millions of dollars in, and they can tell you didn't actually do the work, but rather you simply came up with a prompt then copy+pasted the results, then what does that tell them about you? Are you going to be able to grind to make a project a reality or are you going to constantly be looking for shortcuts? If you couldn't be bothered to dig deep on this project, which in many ways should be your form of creative expression, why would you be able to dig deep when it counts and there's money on the line? People don't want to work with slapdash artists. They see right through the laziness because they want to work with real creatives who have passion for this medium at every stage. End of the day, this is one man's opinion, and AI is a tool available for all to use, but the AI images have grown super tiresome and the AI synopses/pitch materials all blend together at this point. As a creative, you have to understand that execs are seeing hundreds of AI-generated slop pitches, so you need to be focusing on what you can do to actually stand out with engaging graphic design and storytelling that jumps out and screams hey this was written by a real person with something to say.
Which is exactly why I use it for structure and not content.