Producing : Some logline help. by J.C. De La Torre

Hey there my producers. I've got four projects that I really need some logline help on. I want something that would catch a producer's eye. Just a little background, Star Mage is based on a comic series I wrote published by IDW Publishing. Ancient Rising is my novel published a while back, Continuum Force and White Chapel are based on short stories included in my short story collection Nightmares From Erebus. I'm trying to bring all four projects to Hollywood, of course. Not sure if the context matters but I see TV for Continuum Force while I see feature films for Star Mage, Ancient Rising and White Chapel. Of course, I'm open for any medium that gets them on the air. Okay, here we go, let me know how I can improve on these! Star Mage Logline - After discovering he's the son of a fallen alien wizard king, a young sorcerer is thrust into his late father's civil war, forcing him to choose between his rebel brother and his father's interstellar kingdom. White Chapel Logline - A vampire seeks to entice an FBI agent hunting him to become his progeny by revealing how he was turned to the night by Jack the Ripper. Continuum Force Logline - After discovering time travel through reverse engineering the wreckage of the Roswell UFO, a team of scientists and military embark to observe key moments in history but discover that Aliens are attempting to alter humanity's timeline. Ancient Rising Logline - A recent widower, enticed by the Greek God Hermes with answers to mysteries of life and death, joins forces with a discredited archaeologist in a race against a maniacal billionaire to find the mythical continent of Atlantis.