Hi, I've just been sent the edit of the first short film I've starred in, and I'd really like some feedback if that's ok? http://vimeo.com/113058477 The edit wasn't quite what I expected but I hope the story and personality of the characters still comes across! Ciara
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I was wholeheartedly expecting you to kick someone's ass in the opening sequence. It built up so much suspense, lol. When you were in the room being interrogated I think they should have cut more to your face. You're the STAR! I didn't get the direction they went with that. And I couldn't hear what the guy was saying because of the ambient sound, and I'm assuming that was important to the story. He was hitting on you, but I have no idea why he was calling you a subject. I didn't get the story but you're a great actress so keep it up.
Yeah I felt that the story was lost in the editing process. That scene with my boss also had a lot more dialogue and some really good stuff was cut! I think the director was after a sense of detachment but I'm not sure he pulled it off. Thanks so much for your kind comments, though! :)