Hello everyone, Bravely, for the first time I published (here) a part from a script I wrote. I would love if you find time to read it and give me your honest opinion. Thank you.
Screenwriting : Reviews Pleas by Gali Kroin
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Hi Gali. Very brave of you to put yourself out there! I took a quick look and the first thing that stood out was formatting -- it wasn't up to current standards, particularly, how to handle a "series of shots." Perhaps purchase the book, "The Screenwriter's Bible" by David Trottier to help sort those details out. :) I wish you the best with your script!