Screenwriting : Good Sense by Kiam Omar Arrington

I have people that know me who aren't afraid to tell me the truth about what I wrote to read my scripts, then give me feedback or questions. You want to give this to a number of different people and listen to what they have to say. Does the story make sense to them? Is the story believable? If a comedy, do they actually laugh? You get where I'm going...let other people tell you what you are missing or if it makes sense. If they have a lot of questions, chances are you have fundamental flaws in the writing or the storyline. My instructor always told me..."Writing is rewriting."

After you follow, Jim's advice, go with Aray.