Looking for anyone that would like to give me feedback on all or part of my one hour Drama TV pilot (69 pgs). Any time taken for feedback, critiques, corrections would be greatly appreciated. I'll also return the favor if you like.
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Where can it be read? I couldn't find it a logline on your profile.
Oh sorry. I'll fix all that a put al ink up.
If you post it on your profile under loglines I will give it a once-over. I can tell you right off the bat though, 69 pages is toooooo long. Should be under 60.
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I've read some close to that long but I'll have to trim it some. All the top contests allow up to 70 pgs for one hour pilot. It's more of an HBO-premium channel style as opposed to network or cable.