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Tyrone Tizak Jackson

Feature Film

hello everyone, i'm a new upcoming film maker doing my first funding campaign and was just wondering if i can have your opinion on it from watching pitch reel. I know this movie isn't for everybody, but i just feel that it will connect with alot of others..promotional trailer is also included in link

Sam Borowski

Tyrone, Is that you in the Yankees hat? If so, I thought you showed great humor and still passion for your subject matter. Funny, sarcastic, poignant. I would however, break these up into different videos - I have seen that done. So, you have more content to post at different times. I would end the first - and MAIN VIDEO - with "That's all we can ask for man ... Just help us out." That will give you a main video of 2:48. If that's all they watch, I think you are the most engaging one. The ONLY issue I take with you is that you are wearing a YANKEES hat! See, I'm a diehard METS fan! Long-suffering, as well. LOL! On a more serious note, I would end it at 2:48 for the FIRST and MAIN VIDEO and then, break it up to another video. Extra content! Or as they say in MLB in extra innings: Free Baseball! Also, there are LGBTQ distributors that would be interested in a movie like this. Also, I won't lie, it always helps to get some names involved. That's the only drawback that I see, but I do understand it is an independent film. One of my friends, David Harris, played Cochise in The Warriors and also had a major supporting role in an Oscar-Nominated Best Picture, A Soldier's Story, opposite Denzel Washington. He is usually down to work in indies. Just sayin'. Either way, GOD BLESS and STAY FRESH! ;)

Tyrone Tizak Jackson

thanks man..i really appreciate the feed back..this is my first time doing something like this so all constructive criticism is accepted...your never too old to learn something new...thanks again...and leave my ny hat out of this...lol

Tyrone Tizak Jackson

i just want to do what it takes to pitch this movie..I WOULD LOVE TO TALK TO David Harris

Sam Borowski

You're in New York, correct? Reach out to me, we can talk. :)

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