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Yaseen Ali

My pilot script re edit

Hello my name is Yaseen Ali and I've been working on a pilot script for a while and recently did a re edit after I got some really good feeback and I would appreciate it deeply if you could take a look and tell me what you think.

Logline: In Colonial America, an angry slave spends over two hundred years navigating society's evolution while trying to hunt down the Native American spirit guide that cursed him with immortality.

Link: https://www.scriptrevolution.com/scripts/curse

Nathan Hardwick

Great premise and logline.

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