Screenwriting : Hello! by Shawn M Decker

I am!

I'm in!!

How would you all like to move forward? Email or contact here? Also, do you want to exchange PDF's?

Hank good plan.

which genre do you write? is anyone writing comedy?

Hello there! I am interested in that. Philipp Mayr, I am writing comedies :)

Philipp I am working on all genre's.

I think the best way for me to share my work is to give you all a link to my page at Script Revolution. I am not trying to get anyone to sign up for this page but it makes more sense for me rather than emailing PDF's all over the place. Please let me know how I can read all of your work. You can email me here and I will send out my email to you if that works better. If you all have other pages that feature your work send me a link.

https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/shawn-decker

I'd be happy to help but I'm a bit swamped at the moment. If anyone wants to read an 8 page short and the first 10 pages of a feature, they're on my profile. Always looking to improve my abilities so all feedback welcome.

Hi Pamela, great advice posted.

Posted. Coach Murphy, it seems to be the TV Pilot that gets the most likes. Working on a crime drama from the perspective of the Internal Affairs investigators.

I'd love to be a part of this. However, my responses would be an audience, not a pro by any means. I can give you gut reactions. My screenplay is on my profile and I'd love comments on loglines too. Love and Strength to All. I'll start reading the ones available on here as soon as I can.

I'm in and would appreciate an ongoing collaboration this way.

Vaibhav (Gappu) Vaibhav, your comment has nothing to do with the question. You seem to be new at Stage32 and so I please you not to spam other people's posts. You can easily present your own work directly on your profile or within the lounge "your stage". Thank you in advance.

@Elisabeth Meier, Sorry it was a Spam actually.. wasnt intended on your post.

Just posted mine at my profile. Looking forward for your comments! Thanks everyone :)

Oh, mine - or better a couple of my shorts - are to find here: https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/elisabeth-meierhttps://www.scr...

Hey, Shawn. Would love to get some feedback and read someone elses material. Feel free to reach out. Good to meet you!

Hank Biro Nice to see that you take it serious and downloaded all my scripts from ScriptRevolution. Thank you! Will send you a PM for further contact.

Hi Shawn. I am interested in trading scripts with you. Could we trade the first 10 pages of our scripts via email and see if we'd like to continue, and if so...then exchange full scripts? My email is brown.ambers@yahoo.com.

Wow, so many great notes. I have already made changes and have two versions of my Pilot Coach Murphy. Both can be found here and on Script Revolution.

So I hope everyone is getting something out of these collaborations, good notes, valuable connections and great feedback. Plus reading some great scripts.

Hank Biro I will download your sci-fi scripts the next days and fight myself through it. It's not my fav genre, but for you I will do it.

Aray Brown True, the link doesn't work. Sorry, but you also find my profile on scriptrevolution via my profile here at S32 - or you simply click here now: https://www.scriptrevolution.com/profiles/elisabeth-meier

would like to do the same have finished two polished scripts - working on third J_Iannucci@comcast.net

Vaibhav (Gappu) This again is spamming and not relevant for the post's question and idea. Please stop spamming, I already asked you before not to spam. Thank you!

Hello all. Wow, what a movement in collaboration. Looks like it's working. Is everyone using Script Revolution?

Hey Greg Cottrell I'm not. I'm just swapping via email :)

I will start using Script Revolution. Please also feel free to PM me and we can share email addresses. Excited and ready to work will all of you.

I can offer constructive criticism as long as you can. :)

Hi all, sorry I am behind on responding to scripts and will get back to reading tonight.

Shawn - just cross over the I-5 or 205 bridge; you'll find more screenwriters than you know what to do with.

Hey all :) Would anyone be down for reading a drama of mine? It’s a feature. I’m down for reading anything that’s in the crime, action, thriller, romance, drama lane. If so, shoot me an email brown.ambees@yahoo.com.

Doug Nelson. I have been trying to meet up with other writers in the Portland area through Meet up but I have had little luck.

Amber Sharelle - I sent you an email, however, it bounced back.

Thanks Aray. yes, that's my correct email :) Checking my inbox now.

Shawn, just read the first act you uploaded of Coach Murphy. Left some notes on the page.

Hi all, I love the collaboration so great to see every one exchanging scripts and ideas. I want to recommend a new script page that is all about contributors reviewing each other's work. If you are interested PM me and I will send you a link.

Very cool to see this engagement.

Just wanted to shout out Amber. Her script Prodigy was great and she provided welcomed notes on mine.

Hello I am a screenwriter, I also want to collaborate with you.

Hi Aray. I just emailed you my email address. If anyone else would like to trade scripts and notes please feel free to reach out. tayja_x@hotmail.com

Hi Amber Brown, I just sent you my script for review and notes. Please feel free to send me yours for the same. Thank you!

Yes, I would be interested.

I hope everyone enjoyed this and got some great feedback. Sorry, I did not get to as many scripts as I would have liked but if anyone did not get notes please reach out to me and I will be happy to ready your Loglines. So did anyone learn something from this that will help their writing?

Hi Shawn! I'd love to get some notes on my loglines on my profile so I can learn. Thanks for your tremendous efforts to get everyone connected.

Hey guys :) I have some time between projects...so if anyone else would like to swap scripts with me, just shoot me an email: brown.ambers@yahoo.com

I wouldn't be opposed to that.

yeah I am intrested.send me an email at nithuamz@gmail.com

Count me in! I have one short script posted on my profile that needs some work, and I'll read anything that I find in my inbox. Just send it to michael.philip.coles@gmail.com (unless it's already on here).

@amber brown : read the script you shared.. it was really an exceptional one which kept me reading till the end and the easiness you maintained throughout has to be appreciated.. expecting more like this from you..kudos

Nithin SS Thank you so much! Really appreciate you taking the time to read it for me :)

Aray Brown No, it wasn’t strange to me when I read it. Are you asking because he’s a male?

It's great this engagement/encouragement between all of us. I'm not too good at writing , yet, but I know that day is about to come.

Yes, count me in!

Wait, 3 weeks ago?? Haha, am i too late to the conversation??

Yes, Rachel Teo, and others that missed this opportunity, we missed, but if you inbox me, we can share ours if you like.

Aray Brown Yeah, I get you. If you want, maybe you can show Frank briefly fighting (with a staff member) to get in the room?

I second Aray Brown If anyone is new to this thread and wants to swap scripts...or isn’t new but wants to swap with someone else in the thread, you can either leave your email or send a dm/email to the person you’d like to swap with.

Would be interested

I'm game. Don't have a lot of free time, but if anyone wants to exchange notes can shoot me up a dm.

Aray Brown Good for you. I would too.

Are we sharing by what readers want to read or....? I would love to read family drama, romance, emotion driven ensemble stories...? And my pilot is definitely in the TV heart-string pulling drama genre. ...if anyone is into that! :D Up for sharing! Synopsis on my profile.....before deciding to dive in.

Hey Jenna Hogan :) Your pilot sounds interesting. I’d love to read it. I think you’ll love my story Eternal. If you like the log line in my profile, just shoot me an email (brown.ambers@yahoo.com) with your script and I’ll reply with mine.

Sounds like a plan!!

Awesome!! my e-mail address is teoyingyen@gmail.com!

Hilarious..I am replying to you over on the comment you left on my logline. :D THX!!! I'd love to read the rest of Kilbourne!

sent

Hey Jenna Hogan Did you send yours to me yet? I didn’t get it.

I thought so....let me check! If not I will NOW!

Amber Brown sent!

Jenna Hogan Got it :)

Amber Brown emailed you! 2x! Reading Eternal NOW!

Jenna Hogan Jjst got back :) Thank you in advance!

My email is lisaavandiver@gmail.com check my loglinrs out and if anyone wants to read shoot me an email to swap screenplays. I like horror and sci fi

Aray Brown emailed you! Amber Brown now to finish your feature!

Hi :) I know I'm like four weeks behind on this topic but I would love to be a part of it. I Have a script I would dearly love some feed back on.

Hi Pamela! No problem :) yeah Sorkin has a sort of poetry to his dialogue, and Tarantinos subtext is just well, Tarantino.

Doug- Has the feeling of a "TWILIGHT ZONE" episode. You are in good company with Rod Serling.

Hi friends, we are from different countries but with the same thoughts and working in similar field. myself a director cum script writer from kerala, India. I am in plan to make use of our community strength on my next venture.. As a collaborative feature or short film with you guys. I invite suggestion from you people. There will be chances for script writers, editors, musicians, sound recordists etc who could work remotely.. #Together we achieve.. shoot me your thoughts

Sure, I’ll try. Send me a PM.

As long as you are reciprocal. I like my scripts read too.

I have an eye for fantasy, syfy, crime, drama and comedy.

Can’t do horror or terror. Real life is enough for me in those genres.

Depending on where you are located I have found this a great group for writers who want to test out their scripts.

https://www.meetup.com/LA-Play-Reading/events/253249084/

Aray Brown Hope you place :)

Would anyone be up for reading a romantic drama feature or a 1-hour drama pilot? If so, please email me brown.ambers@yahoo.com. I’ll read anything except sci-fi/fantasy just because I don’t know much about those genres.

Hi everyone. There are some public websitr options out there also. Just to chime in.

There's scriptmother dotcom - you submit feedback and in return get "credits for others reading your script - very loose quality IMHO.

And there are others too, but this seems to be the best of the lot of this sort of thing I tried.

Amber Brown I would love to read your romantic drama. If you want to send it, please email me at jondgriffin3@gmail.com. I have a romantic comedy if you would like to read it.

Hey Jon Griffin just emailed you :)

Okay. I will take a look, Amber Brown :)

Amber Brown I have sent you my romantic comedy via reply of your email.

Also Talentville.com still does peer reviews.

Amber Brown I just emailed you another script for your feedback. It is a short film titled "The Friend Zone".

I’m up for a bit of good sharing and constructive feedback!

Jon Griffin Can you please resend it? I haven’t received it for some reason.

This sounds great! I would love to be a part as well!

Crystal Kelly If you want to swap, just shoot me an email at: brown.ambers@yahoo.com

Yeah, i'm definitely in. Where can i sign up?

Clevie J Padmore The way it’s mostly been working is you email the script you want feedback on to the person you’re requesting feedback from and they reply sending you the script they want feedback on. My email is above if you want to swap with me.

thanks Amber Brown

Amber Brown I will resend it. No problem.

I would suggest this group. It meets once a month, cost five dollars. It is a great opportunity for a writer to see their work performed.

https://www.meetup.com/LA-Play-Reading/