I have been racking my brain trying to figure out why I can't get my pitch right for one of my screenplays and after reading and studying and re reading I finally figured it out. My story beats are wrong. Here's the website that straightened me out.
Screenwriting : Story beats and writing your pitch. by Steve Sherman
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So in a nutshell what was your main takeaway to fix the pitch?
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Outstanding and to the point, well said.
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Thanks for posting Steve! I will check this out. Looks very useful.
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Thanks for sharing this.
Hi Ricki, I didn't give enough of the protagonist backstory in the 1st act. I gave it through expose late in act 1 and it wasn't obvious enough to give strength to the B story. Once I put the info into action in the first scene/sequence it made the B story pop.
I think the website gives a clearer explanation of story beat than Save the Cat. Keeps you on track in story better.
Thanks this was a definite help!
One can still buy paint-by-numbers kits at hobby & craft stores. Beat sheets are the equivalents for writers: arguably useful at first to gain insight into composition and palette, to be discarded as quickly as possible.