Hi All, I'm Tom Needell, This is my Pilot Proposal. Let me know what think? Thanks again to Jason Mirch for all your help.
LOGLINE: Everybody thinks you have to be rich to be Royalty. NAH! All you need is a Goat!
Proof of Concept
This is 7 of 23 future episodes.
FUTURE EPISODES
Episode 1. Ana decides to go to a cooking school so she can get a job at a Polish restaurant. She takes Lord Harry along who turns out to be the best cook.
Episode 2. After graduating, Ana gets a job in Polish Restaurant that serves only Polish people. Her next job is at a Polish supermarket in the produce department, where she and the goat bite on other peoples produce.
Episode 3. Ana becomes an instructor at a Polish School of Comedy. Lord Harry is her assistant. She demonstrates her unusual warm-up technique, passing gas.
Episode 4. Jack sends Ana to a Therapist who has a lot of Polish clients. The therapist asks Ana to demonstrate to patients his unusual anger management technique smashing chairs with a baseball bat. Next Jack gives her lead to a Polish Chiropractor. Upon waiting for Ana a patient overhears sounds of cracking bones followed by a horrible scream coming from an adjacent room.
Episode 5. Ana enters a Polish Hot Dog Eating Contest and wins five thousand dollars, even though she eats one hot dog casually and feeds the rest to the goat.
Episode 6. After the goat eats a can of very hot chili, Ana takes him to Animal Emergency Room. After a suggestion from a doctor, Ana takes a goat to Beverly Hills Dentist for teeth cleaning.
Episode 7. Jack and Ana celebrate her getting her first Driving License. Upon Jack's suggestion, Ana searches for relatives as a delivery person, delivering horses to people living in apartments. Next Jack tells her he was once a tour guide. So Ana works as a Polish tour guide, giving tours of famous Polish actors, imitating Jack, she pretends to be blind.
The script can be found on my profile. All feedback welcome.
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Hey Thomas, this is Karen from the Stage 32 team. I just wanted to let you know I moved your post from Introduce Yourself to Your Stage, as it fits much better there. But feel free to do another post discussing who you'd like to connect with, what you're working on or what you'd like to work on. Let me know if you have any questions, and all the best to you!
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Thank you. I hope i get some feedback