Hey everyone, I'd please like feedback on my 93 page Female-led horror "Mystery in the Nursing Home"
I'm ready to swap. I'll read whatever you have.
Logline: In a crummy nursing home, an elderly woman must investigate the disappearance of her granddaughter in hands of a new patient who might be an ancient god with Alzheimer's, or else she'll lose a loved one, again.
or else she's gonna lose be locked up in there forever.
What does that mean? Confused by your use of the word "lose"
I'll give it a read.
Yes, I will swap "The Gavel" screenplay (96pg) with "Mystery in the Nursing Home".
I would strongly suggest a basic spell check, before you post anything, so you don"t look stupid.
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Marty, consider this; Brian is in Argentina so English may not be his primary language nor is it likely close to that weird language that you Aussies speak.
yeah I should have taken the language difference into account.
Use Google.com Translation I have tested it. It is pretty accurate.
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