I thought of a logline but had trouble and need help. It's an anthology film about people who discovers cursed objects. Can you help me? Thanks.
Filmmaking / Directing : Help with logline by Tony Byrd
Help with logline
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Well, we're not here to do your work for you. If you want input, you have to deliver first. What is your logline? Work at it. Keep working at it. Then post it. Then ask for feedback. That's your job as a writer. Write! Write! Rewrite!
Post one up and people will comment on it.
Thanks. I appreciate it.
What's the logline you have?
Here. "Six interwined stories between people discovers everyday objects who are cursed by the unknown."
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What intertwines the stories? Are the truly intertwined or do the just have a common theme? Does each object have the same curse or a different one? Try this:
"Six tales of unsuspecting people falling victim to black magic and struggling to survive as everyday items unleash the curses that have been placed upon them."
They have a common theme. It's the same curse.
Then try this: "A curse travels from one everyday item to another and ruins six lives that may not survive if they can't figure out how to remove it."