Hello everyone!
I'm a writer-director that shot a pilot presentation for my comedy series "Mo's Slim Chance' would you give it a go? Thank you in advance for your time!
Pilot Presentation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n4rrwPKwa-g
Title: Mo's Slim Chance
Logline: An over-the-top mockumentary following an Arab immigrant's chaotic path to becoming a U.S. citizen, while struggling to balance political correctness, social consciousness, and what it really means to be Arab in America.
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I watched it Mustafa Knight . I find it to be absolutely hilarious! When Mo couldn't find his race on the form and he just looked at the camera I about died. Good luck with this.
Thank you so much Martin Reese Really appreciate that you took the time to watch it!
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I liked it. Great use of the fourth wall. The supporting characters may benefit from more range and depth, but I'm sure that will be the case in the pilot. The important premise of intolerance is sadly the norm so we need shows like this.
Thank you so much Tom Stohlgren Really appreciate the feedback :)
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I liked it. I laughed way too loud at him studying to be a commercial pilot, and I do like the break in the fourth wall. Good stuff!
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Thank you Solange Plaza ! I’m glad you laughed out loud, that’s definitely the goal :) Really appreciate the feedback!
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This is so funny! I laughed at the reporter right away saying I'm Puerto Rican... This tickles you in the right spot. I'm getting The Office vibes
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Thank you so much for watching it and the feedback Xaviera Iglesias I’m so happy to hear this made you laugh. I’m a hug fan of The Office (BBC) & (American) So I’ll take that compliment: :)
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I was gonna say it is more of the UK version for me
Yay! That was the inspiration:) Xaviera Iglesias
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LOL!! This was really funny from the get go. The actor playing Moostafa
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Thank you for sharing!
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That was hilarious! Good luck!
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Loves me a mockumentary!
Thank you all for watching it and the feedback! Really appreciate it :) it motivates me to keep going!!!
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LOL, Thank you....
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lol wow