Hi everyone! Recently I made a post asking for your opinion on my logline. But, starting to write a synopsis, I understand I was totally off-track and not revealing enough of the story :(
I'm sorry about making a second post about the same story, but I'd love to hear your opinion on the logline!
Logline:
After the death of his long-time girlfriend, a devoted boyfriend experiences a hard time coping with grief – up to the point of not being able to leave the place of the death and thus, living on the street,
Thanks to anyone in advance!
