This weekend I finally finished my romance drama 'James and Millie' (working title). So that's my first screenplay done for 2022 and now third completed feature. Has taken about two months to write but I finally got those words 'fade out' on paper. Now I'll spend a couple of weeks editing it and refining it and then send it off to a few people for coverage and then make whatever changes/recommendations are required. Then take it to market.
One thing I need to do is revisit my logline - so please feel to help as it's not perfect.
'When town planner James takes a job in a dying rustbelt town, the last thing he planned on was the guarded and enigmatic Millie. When tragedy strikes, James learns that planning for love and winning someone’s heart is harder than turning any town around. '
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Congrat! Good on ya mate! I like your logline, hope someday I can watch it on Netflix :D
Hi Pete, congratulations on finishing your script! I'd recommend posting your logline here for some more feedback: https://www.stage32.com/loglines