Screenwriting : Please share your thoughts about my logline. by Robert Cole

I chuckled picturing the terror of telling an angry Mike Tyson. While on the surface it limits your casting opportunities, it could be cast with any celebrity famous for their anger and or strength. I like it.

Thank you! The script is a killer! It also includes a few cameos from celebs known to have pets. I have a few very funny comedians in mind to play the lead...and plan to pitch it to them.

I also have a movie deck!

Good luck with the pitching and may you get the attachments you desire.

I'm laughing already. I agree with Tom, Mike's funny, although a bit on the nose. I'd say Alec Baldwin would work. Or you create a character in a situation, like a serious news anchor who's just been fired and replaced by a pair of legs. Like Harrison Fords character in Morning Glory. Or simply a dictator, visiting LA.

My first choice is a Kevin Hart type lead...I want to go big!

Robert, I love that logline...and I wish you all the VERY BEST on the ensuing movie!

Thank you Jim!

It's fresh, different approach, simple, a good hook, doable, it has potential if you ask me. Well done, Robert.

Mike Tyson's dog? I take it that main character dies within the first five minutes past the credits.

Thank you Niksa!

Well Jenean...let's just say that he has 3 days to find the dog before Mike Tyson gets back in town...so you know there's stress!

Three days before a dog a vet loses Mike Tyson’s dog, he must ….. before….. or Tyson will …..

Exactly Craig!

OK, the dog should definitely be some ridiculous-looking small breed, like something Paris Hilton would cart around.

As for 'fear of Tyson', the best story was how Robin Givens was "dating" Brad Pitt after her divorce from Tyson. But ... Tyson still had keys to her house. So one fine morning Brad wakes up in Robin's bed to see Tyson standing there. Can't remember if Givens or Pitt told the story.

Oh my....I'm sure he's still having nightmares!