Hello folks!
Please, if you have three minutes, watch my super short film and critique it. Be brutal. I can handle it.
Your Stage : SPIN A KNIFE AS A NEEDLE (super short horror film) by Jessica Lea Hurt
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Gripping. That's as brutal as I can be. It's a lot of effect from minimal resources.
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I like that you used videos and pictures with voiceover, Jessica Lea Hurt. That's a great way to keep the budget low. And that's a great way to produce your own content.
Two suggestions:
#1) Make all of the videos and pictures horizontal or vertical, not a mix.
#2) Make the clock scenes one continuous shot. Right now, the clock scenes skip.
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Jessica Lea Hurt Congratulations for getting it in the can. I suggest that you add essential context. Too many questions to list about character motivation - for me at least. Thanks for sharing.
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There was enough tension for me to have thought there was going to be a jump scare, or a violent bloody image, or anything else that could be expected in horror fiction that I've witnessed at the end. This could make for a unique psychological piece somehow!