Your Stage : What do you think about my query email? by Steven Gibson

What do you guys think about my query email?

Dear Mr. Fred Seibert

I admired your work on helping Nickelodeon during their early years, helping it to become the kids’ TV network we know today, and along with your work with the network and your shows like Oh Yeah! Cartoons, the Fairly Odd Parents, Chalk Zone, My Life as a Teenage Robot and Fanboy and Chum Chum, and also helped Netflix launch the Castlevania series. I also how you helped out my favorite cartoon creators get their big breaks in animation, like Butch Hartman, Genndy Tartakovsky, Craig McCracken and John R Dilworth. You helped Nickelodeon and these cartoon creators, so I hope that you could help me get my cartoon the recognized by Hollywood.

Logline:5 Anthropomorphic Koala Bear siblings who live in the fictional city of Eucalypcity California, use their martial arts skills taught by their adoptive human mother, to fight crime and villains, including their mother’s archenemy, Professor Steel Skull.

Synopsis :The series takes place in the 21st century, centers on 5 Anthropomorphic Koala Bear siblings Paul, Bruce, Martin, Jake and Fluffy who were just babies where they were created in an ancient alien spaceship. The professor who discovered the spaceship, wants his assistant to get rid of the koalas. His assistant Rose McScott secretly saves them and destroys the spaceship and her boss’s desire for world domination. She takes the koalas to Eucalypcity California where they live on the outskirts in a very tall tree house, where they watch over the entire city for crime and villains. Rose raises the koalas as her own children and teaches them every martial art she knows so they can protect themselves. The Koalas use their martial arts skills to fight evil and crime in Eucalypcity, while they protect themselves and Rose from the evil Professor Steel Skull, an evil scientist who wears a steel skull helmet on his head, as he continues his quest for world domination. The koala bears go on action packed adventures in and out of Eucalypcit.y The city the Koalas live in is Eucalypcity where it’s located in California and Eucalyptus trees are spread all over the streets of the city., the koalas also enjoy hanging out with their human friends like Stan Popper, Peter Smith and Dexter Rexes from the boyband S.P.D( Super Popular Dudes), Billy Bills and Katelyn Reads , a spy from the spy agency called Area 1. The Koalas enjoy training with their mother in the treehouse courtyard, doing all different types of martial arts that Rose has learned, they even get to learn the most advance fighting styles that Rose knows. The Koalas also enjoy eating eucalyptus leaves from the treehouse they live in and they enjoy eating tacos from a taco restaurant called Pablo’s. The koalas go out in public while wearing hoodies, baseball caps and sunglasses, but when there is crime they take off their hoodies, sunglasses and baseball caps to fight the criminals and villains. The Koalas have a lot of supervillains they fight through out the series along with their mother’s archenemy, Professor Steel Skull. The Koalas also get help from scientist allies like Professor Marvin Popper and Professor Lucy Popper who are both Quantum Physicists , Professor Susan Smith who is a Astro Physicist and Professor Ryan Rexes and Professor Violet Rexes who are both advance technologists . Through the series the koalas fight Professor Steel Skull himself, along with his henchmen Ivan the Poacher, a bald poacher who wears an eye patch that can fire a powerful laser out of it, Crabby, a humanoid crab monster, and Muscle Mass, an extremely muscular man who wears a metal helmet, along with other villains such as the Red Fist Ninja Clan lead by their leader Toya Kye, a living toy doll named Baby Cries A Lot, a lady who communicates and controls bats named the Bat Mistress and her cyborg henchman B.I.G (Bionic Indestructible Gentleman) the Robot King a robot who rules all over the robots in an amusement park that flies all over the world, the Plant Princess an environmental activist turned super villain who controls plant life, a failed magician turned evil magician named Jack the Jack-O-lantern, Zero G’s a rapper that controls gravity, a gang of superpowered freaks called the Street Freaks, the evil billionaire Buster Bills and he’s the father of Billy Bills, Sensei X Rose’s old Sensei who turned evil, Shark Bite a humanoid shark monster, Mr. Magma a man with anger issues turned supervillain after getting hit with a laser that turned his body into magma, Doc Croc a crazed scientist who turned himself into a crocodile human hybrid freak and the Warruses another dimensional walrus who live in a world full of ice. The koala bears have different roles they have in the series, Paul is the leader of the koalas, who gives commands and orders to the rest of the koalas during their adventures to protect the city, Bruce is the muscle of the koalas, he has a tough Jersey guy attitude, Martin is the brains of the koala who has a geeky personality and has an IQ of 500 and in counting, Jake is the skater of the koala bears, who has a skater slacker accent and sometimes uses his skateboard as a weapon, and Fluffy is the valley girl of the koalas who has a valley girl accent, loves shopping and has a crush on Stan Popper.

The casting suggestions I have in mind are, Drake Bell voices Paul, Zeno Robinson voices Bruce, Max Mittleman voices Martin, Jon Allen voices Jake and Kausar Mohammed will voice Fluffy and Sarah Natochenny will voice Rose.

The genres of the show are Action and animation and the show is rated TV-G. The most shows I watched from your studio were from Nickelodeon. I grew up watching most Nickelodeon shows, and I admire the talented writers Nickelodeon has, and so I would like to join Nickelodeon to become 1 of the talented writers and to make my cartoon recognized by young viewers.

The reason why I got inspired to write this script for my series, is to help protect the animals that I love and I don’t want them to go extinct anytime soon. The koalas are an endangered species that need to have more attention from the media. I also got inspired by watching anime while I was growing up. As a man with Autism I’ve struggle with trying to break into the film and TV industry, and each time I pitch Crime Fighting Karate Koala Bears they just rejected it, and I’m tired of getting my dreams crushed. I’ve written over 100s of episodes of this series of mine, and I got my series copyrighted.

I believe in the action packed adventures of the Crime Fighting Karate Koala Bears will be great for all ages. It’s an action thrill ride for the entire family, new allies and villains shall be introduced through the series, with exciting adventures and action in every episode, and it will be great with audiences all over the world, especially in Australia, because that’s the place where Koalas are from.

I hope that you get this query email, I hope that you accept my idea, and please reply back to email me back or call me

Sincerely

Steven Gibson

Just to have you guys know, that Crime Fighting Karate Koala Bears is copyrighted.