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Brianna Duttry

New script done

I just finished my screenplay called Top Hats and Lace A Steampunk Adventure. Logline: "An aristocrat, a nanny, a steampunk cowboy, and a handsome mayor team up to save the day." Would anyone like to read it? Email briannastoddard@yahoo.com.

Craig D Griffiths

Love steam punk stuff. Your logline is far to vague. You have summed the entire film into “save the day”.

Brianna Duttry

Okay thank you. I will work some on that.

Craig D Griffiths

This is not your story, just a suggestion.

After a virus spreads across Europe a aristocrat, a nanny, a steampunk cowboy, and a handsome mayor try to get a cure into the water supply but a local war hinders their efforts.

Brianna Duttry

That helps thank you!

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