Screenwriting : New log line by Carmen Ferreira

Carmen Ferreira

New log line

Hey guys!

Would you spare a few seconds to read and rate my log line, Please?

Bear in mind that English is not my first language, so it's been a bit challenging and reading some insights would be much appreciated.

Cheers!

https://www.stage32.com/loglines/54633

Sam Sokolow

Hi Carmen Ferreira - this is a great start and you clearly have a big idea here. I am not an expert at longlines but they are a skill unto themselves. I highly recommend checking out this upcoming Stage 32 webinar hosted by WME story editor Chris Lockhart on how to make your loglines attractive to A-List talent. Here's a link: https://www.stage32.com/webinars/How-To-Make-Your-Logline-Attractive-to-...

Carmen Ferreira

Thanks, Sam! Im going to check this out! :)

I post my loglines here merely for some insights, cause I can tell some people underrate them just for perhaps being unable to be better themselves. I'm ok with that, cause we have to be able to handle all kind of criticism.

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