Hi all,
I'm in the process of putting a pitch deck together for my upcoming docu-series.
Take a look and let me know what you think.
https://tome.app/stolen-afrikan/fundraising-pitch-deck-for-stolen-afrika...
Thank you.
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Well done. I am intrigued.
Incredible pitch deck and video on the second page, John H Legend! This docu-series looks amazing! I have a few suggestions/notes:
#1) On the Why This Documentary page, there’s an extra space before “identity” (in the Why It Matters section).
#2) I think the Content & Format page should be closer to the front of the pitch deck. Maybe after the Synopsis.
#3) On the Business Model page, remove the spaces in “co - branding” (in “Merchandise and co - branding”).
#4) The text in the middle of the Production Timeline page looks transparent.
#5) I don’t think you need a semicolon before “auctioning” on the Post Launch page.
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Hi John H Legend! This project looks really interesting! If you'd like feedback from a pro, shoot me an email at success@stage32.com and I can recommend some options for a Pitch Deck Review for you :)
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Looks good and like a very interesting project. Bravo.