Hello Stage 32 community,
I'm excited to share a piece of music I composed specifically for one of the most emotional scenes in The Green Mile. This scene holds a special place in the hearts of many, and I aimed to create music that amplifies its emotional depth and humanity.
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Your music is beautiful! But I feel it is too busy for a scene like this. The music should be more minimalistic, and I would never use chimes for such a dark and dismal scene. Less is more here, and should be darker, less orchestration.
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Shahriar Vaghfrahmani I think it would be great since you are asking for feedback is to respond to peoples feedback, because people take the time out of their lives to offer constructive criticism that will help you improve.
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I agree with Kevin Gamble , seems too busy throughout. At the :07 those bright bells need to be not so bright- like the other areas with similar sounds.
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In this scene - it’s all underscore, so not many moving lines. There is more activity near the end of the piece. Sometimes the lightness heightens the emotional part created by the actors; it does depend on the producer / composer as well, in the particular movie.
Congrats using your time making this music!
https://youtu.be/CmxArNBJHFQ?si=lSZcnVYd1NwOUZro
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I really thank you dear Kerry Kennard ana Kevin Gamble !
your comments made me do better since now.