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I listened to your advice and created this music for the film. Now what do you think?
Composing : The result of your advices: by Shahriar Vaghfrahmani
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Hi, Shahriar Vaghfrahmani. I'm not a professional, but you did a great job on the music. I think it's busy (a lot of sounds) from 01:02 to 01:14, but you might've made it that way on purpose.
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Agree, I like it!!
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Thank you dear Rutger Oosterhoff for listening
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Thank you Maurice Vaughan , I will check that time duration and think of your comment.
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You're welcome, Shahriar Vaghfrahmani.
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Makes me want to watch it all again.
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It's terrific work, Shahriar Vaghfrahmani, and really helps bring the piece to life. I do agree with Maurice Vaughan that the music in that section may benefit from a little tone down as its a slice of street life montage and the musci in that section feels like a build or a chase. I love what sounds like accoustic guitar at the beginning with the orchestarls behing it - conects me emotionally to the POV. Well done.
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Sounds great, Shahriar. Great work.
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dear Pamela Jaye Smith Thank you♥️
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Thank you Sam Sokolow for your detailed comment. I wanna read again next time
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really thank Rich Terdoslavich for your kindness message and comment
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Yes, very nice. lots better from the others. At 2:27, if you had a more clearer tone where you have the focus between the two people (kid and adult eye moment), it might bring the story more to life - connecting the audience /listeners to your story (movie). Like Sam Said I like the warm guitar at the beginning. Maybe some places bring it down a bit, and focus on your melody and other parts.
I added a Violin part to one of my Instrumentals (Jazz Proj.), and it really added as a sub harmony - as planned. Adding a Violin solo in the B section and coming back to the A part, (try and imagine) the last note stood out for a while, [high C above middle C] though I worked on it so the Cello Melody comes back in stronger.
Yep, this orchestration is subjective and you've made a nice work here.