While I am at it...Here is another logline. Do your best!
Anything Can Happen in the Woods - Logline:
When his wife cheats on him and leaves him broke, Mitch Gilmore returns to his hometown to rebuild his life—only to find himself tangled in old friendships, new love, and a high school musical in need of saving.
Great job on the logline, Scott Morse! I only have one suggestion: change "Mitch Gilmore" to "a _______ (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality) _______ (his title/job/career)."
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Great job on the logline, Scott Morse! I only have one suggestion: change "Mitch Gilmore" to "a _______ (the main flaw he has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes his personality) _______ (his title/job/career)."
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When I read "only to find himself" I look for a miscalculation. Is the movie warmhearted drama?
A romantic soul cheated on by his wife returns to his hometown, old friendships, new love, and a high school musical in need of saving.