Hey everyone,
I just finished a short film script called “Nothing Changes” and I’d really appreciate some feedback.
It’s a psychological short about a man stuck in a looping office space, which slowly breaks apart as he’s forced to confront something from his past.
I’ve been focusing a lot on visual storytelling, atmosphere, and keeping dialogue minimal, so I’m especially interested in feedback on:
– Does the concept feel clear and engaging?
– Does the escalation work (pacing, tension)?
– Is the ending impactful / understandable?
– Anything that feels unnecessary or could be stronger?
I’m currently planning to film this soon, so any feedback before production would help a lot.
Also for context, I’m 15 and trying to improve my writing and filmmaking, so I’m open to any kind of constructive feedback.
If anyone’s interested in reading the script, I’d be happy to share it.
Thanks in advance!
I have a short with no dialogue, it was my favorite thing to write. What your logline?
Crystal Nadine Rollen
That sounds really interesting, especially with no dialogue.
The logline for mine would be:
A man trapped in a looping office is forced to confront a buried mistake from his past as reality around him begins to collapse.
Would love to hear more about your short as well!