I need good or bad comments and suggestions about a web series that I'm making. Please check it out and help me grow as a storyteller and filmmaker. Here is the first episode: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kiketcd7m6w Thank you!!
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Enjoyed the first episode - I like the editing style and the actors are really good. I think the writing needs a bit of work though - it felt a bit flat to me. You could have accomplished the same jokes and story points in half the time which would really tighten it up. If you get a minute please check out my webseries Jenny Ringo at www.jennyringo.com and if you can sign up to the mailing list there that would be fantastic. I'm trying to build up an audience for it so need a lot of supporters! Thanks! Chris
Thank you!!