Filmmaking / Directing : Short Film, No New memories. finished piece. by Dave Moyle

Hi Everyone, I'd really appreciate your feedback on this short film I recently Directed. It's the first of 3 new short films I have to bring out currently. I'd really like to know what you feel about the film, if you connected with anyone ?? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DnjqRK9s-D0&feature=youtu.be