Financing / Crowdfunding : I have done a complete overhau… by Salina Conlan

I have done a complete overhaul to the information on the front page of my Indie Go Go account. I'd love to get some feed back. [www.indiegogo.com/Resistance-post][1] Is this better? What makes you feel passionate about the project and what leaves you cold. Putting some production stills up on there and here as well. [1]: http://www.indiegogo.com/Resistance-post