Screenwriting : Blogging my Screenplay process by Lee Smith

I am about to embark upon planning and writing my first screenplay. I would be very grateful if some of you could read and perhaps give me some pointers on my progress in this exciting new endeavor. Here is the prologue to my project - http://leeshausoftherisingsun.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/the-script-writin... and here is the first part of the long process - http://leeshausoftherisingsun.wordpress.com/2013/11/25/the-screenplay-pa...