Hi Greg, welcome into the connection.
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Hell Follows In is the story of a man, who after his entire family is killed and himself shot numerous times, making it a miracle that he survived, is commissioned by God to defend humanity and the country against a terrorist organization and government agencies, ushering in a unique form of justice in an almost nightmarish form.
Dark Sky Terror is the story about a swarm of deadly hornets invading a small town and starts killing everyone in sight, the town occupants face ultimate terror and a fight for survival.
I would take the title out. Just get to the meat of the story to pull us in for a logline. Just my take haha
The Drifter is about an Air Force Major, whose wife and daughter are brutally murdered and during his investigation, discovers the ones he seeks is the sheriff, his department and a vicious motorcycle gang, putting the town in fear and forcing the Major to engage his own form of justice.
You may want to change your logline a bit. For example, instead write, "An Air Force Major whose family is brutally murdered uncovers the truth that the killers work for the crooked local sheriff and his henchmen who control the whole county by fear and violence." Just a thought!
Hi! My name is Gregg Allen and I'm a screenwriter, plus a non-working actor and choreographer at this time. I have wrote 5 screenplays to date, have not sold any yet. I hold 2 black belts in martial arts, plus an expert in weapons and I utilize that knowledge in my scripts. Thank you for reading my post and hope to hear from you.
Cool Gregg, I love martial arts. I wish you all the best with your screenplays, acting, and other projects.
It's great to have you on Stage 32, Gregg! Best of luck to you on your screenplays!
Thanks for the network add, Gregg, from a fellow screenwriter in Vancouver, WA.
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