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A band of characters, who society would deem to have societal mental weaknesses, band together to thwart the attacks of their arch nemesis.
***Note: This is a comic script. Registered.
Everything about this script is for review only; If you are interested in any of these please contact, myself, John German.
SYNOPSIS:
The main characters are below:
The Panic - normal person, but who, when gets anxious, grows to 5 times his size and becomes engraged with a red color and yellow veins.
Captain Height - leader of the LOW group. He has an intense fear of heights and wears a blue suit with a white letter H in the middle.
Hide & Seek - Has social anxiety. Has tremendous speed and has a blue suit with green shoes.
Doctor Hypochondria - This villain has an incredible case of health anxiety. This person is in all white. They fly around in a full body scan plane.
Professor Doom - Unrelenting pessimist who drives a motorcycle.
Story points:
The story follows The Panic, Hide and Seek, and Captain Heights as they try and seek out the two villains who are causing issues. These encounters lead the panic into being hit by boulders, which eventually leads to the line coming out "Boulders! We don't need no stinking boulders.". Hide and Seek hiding behind a tree going to the bathroom, jokingly, calling himself "The Fertilizer.". This also leads to the three joking about Professor Doom calling him Doctor Doom which enrages Professor Doom. In the end Doctor Hypochondria gets cut, which leads quickly to his health anxiety, making his mind race and leading to him screaming "MRSA!". He flies away in his full body scan plane with Professor Doom hanging on to the back.
The point of this comic script is to portray that any quirk or "weakness" society tries to place on someone doesn't make them any less super.