Hi David, great to e-meet you!
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Thanks Derrick! Just getting myself sorted on it.
Hi Erica. I'm RB, co-founder and CEO of Stage 32. I know first-hand the challenges all creatives face finding work and attracting attention to their projects. That's why we created Stage 32. Our members run the gamut from film students to award winners. The community is now 60,000+ members strong spanning 175+ countries. This is a network for you, built by you. Like most things in life, the more you participate, the greater the rewards. We ask all new members to help us spread the word through other social media such as Facebook, LinkedIn, and Twitter. We also ask that you help strengthen the...
Expand postHi Erica. I'm RB, co-founder and CEO of Stage 32. I know first-hand the challenges all creatives face finding work and attracting attention to their projects. That's why we created Stage 32. Our members run the gamut from film students to award winners. The community is now 60,000+ members strong spanning 175+ countries. This is a network for you, built by you. Like most things in life, the more you participate, the greater the rewards. We ask all new members to help us spread the word through other social media such as Facebook, LinkedIn, and Twitter. We also ask that you help strengthen the community by inviting at least 5 fellow creatives. Check out Invite friends to Stage 32 on the upper right side of your profile. Thanks for being a part of this most talented and inspiring community. PS - Be sure to check us out on Facebook and follow us on Twitter at @Stage32online.
I just got my first review on Talentville and was ripped to shreds for my use of present participles: "Waving her arms, she runs toward the police car." Although the reviewer mistakenly calls the sentence past tense, I remember reading (somewhere at some point) negative comments on the use of -ing f...
Expand postI just got my first review on Talentville and was ripped to shreds for my use of present participles: "Waving her arms, she runs toward the police car." Although the reviewer mistakenly calls the sentence past tense, I remember reading (somewhere at some point) negative comments on the use of -ing forms. My reviewer would have had me say: "She waves her arms and runs toward the police car." The two sentences appear to me to have slightly different meanings and implications. Are present participles to be avoided in screenwriting?
I haven't had fireworks go up in my pajamas in ages.
@Dan & Mark -- I'm a producer, I'll bring the Wine and the Tequila...
the line is dull to begin with, but depending on the context of why she is waving arms around, say.... "With arms swinging, she sprints at the police car" The 'ING' is present but despite being earlie...
Expand commentthe line is dull to begin with, but depending on the context of why she is waving arms around, say.... "With arms swinging, she sprints at the police car" The 'ING' is present but despite being earlier in the line, the waving arms is clearly a screen action which is complementing her running action, not taking the precedent. From my perspective it would seem an ING would be permissible where the action is concurrent with a stronger form of action such as her run. we also have to strong active words both beginning with S. Also these words swing and sprint have an air of Assonance about them. (The word swinging should still be critiqued as it too could have an alternate meaning. We also omit any 'AND', & compress to use just one SHE or HER. I think the ING's can be acceptable, (there is no concrete right or wrong in this medium) but the smart way to do it would be to use them to give strength to whatever action is about to succeed it. But yeh all about efficient assertive writing giving a clear sense of here and now and omitting those dull bridging words that clog up the big print.
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