Joanna Karselis, thanks for your comments on my project STICK&MOVE..
My name is Will Belcher, Producer, and Content Creator for PYRAMID FILMWORKS
I signed up for 3 Stage 32 Pitch Session to see what the film executive’s think about my STICK&MOVE script. Would appreciate your feedback
STICK&MOVE
GENRE: Action, Sports Drama, Inspirational True Story
LOGLINE:
NEVER LET...
Expand postMy name is Will Belcher, Producer, and Content Creator for PYRAMID FILMWORKS
I signed up for 3 Stage 32 Pitch Session to see what the film executive’s think about my STICK&MOVE script. Would appreciate your feedback
STICK&MOVE
GENRE: Action, Sports Drama, Inspirational True Story
LOGLINE:
NEVER LET ANYONE STAND IN YOUR WAY
NOT EVEN YOURSELF
SYNOPSIS:
Story: Based on the incredible life story of Victorio Belcher, an up and coming, welter- weight boxer from Indiana who reluctantly runs drugs on the side for the notorious Detroit Boys to make ends meet. But, soon after he signs to fight for the championship of the world, Vic is shot by a jealous gang member - twice in the chest, once in the head - and left for dead in the streets of South Bend. After he awakens from a three month coma, Vic, by the grace of God and support of his ailing father by his side, begins the most inspirational comeback in sports history.
You're welcome, Will Belcher.
For a logline, you want something like: "After ______ (something happens), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) must _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)....
Expand commentYou're welcome, Will Belcher.
For a logline, you want something like: "After ______ (something happens), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) must _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
You might want to add the antagonist in the logline.
Example:
“Dog Treat Heist” (Animation/Comedy) After a group of dog criminals arrives in a small town, an impulsive dog sheriff must defend a dog treat factory so they won't steal food that's meant for hungry dog families.
Thanks Maurice Vaughan .
You're welcome, Will Belcher.
After a white Hollywood starlet turns up dead the police wants to bring down JD Hood and the thriving jazz scene on Central Avenue
The true life story of Victorio Belcher, an up and coming, welter- weight boxer who reluctantly runs drugs on the side. After getting shot by a jealous gang member of the Detroit Boys - twice in the chest, once in the head - and left for dead, Vic awaken from a three month coma and make the most inspirational comeback in boxing history.
Love the idea. I would remove the detail of where the boxer was shot from the logline. It is a cool detail but slows breaks the logline and it's read up. It is also not important to the overall story which is what the logline focuses on. You tell us that he gets shot by a gang and is then in a coma. That is all we need to know :)
Thank You Steven Blows for those comments. I took the note, good points.
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