Acting : Feedback by Jermaine Jackson

Jermaine Jackson

Feedback

Hi all, I'm new to this and I'm just wanting to better my acting skills so I would like to get some feedback on some of my work. Here is a short I did for the 48 hour film project. http://youtu.be/1Z5er_lxnpI

Debbie Croysdale

Hi, this is natural believable acting, with a realistic plot, as soon as the film opened I could sense the two guys standing behind the man gardening were "Bad Ass". Also I got foreboding that the man attending to the weeds was pious and venomous, and if he was this obsessive over his lawn, what would he be like with bigger possessions in life? My guess was correct as his non respect of people, came to fruition, sending a brutal home invasion to a local woman. Tense and emotional acting, as she tries to be threshold guardian of her ancestral home, but it's a pitiful plight. Good mind play between characters, and unexpected twist at the end when her supposed saviour, shoots her.

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