Animation : Cosmic Dawn: Elena the Shard of Innocence Episode 1 Scene 2 by Jason McArdle

Jason McArdle

Cosmic Dawn: Elena the Shard of Innocence Episode 1 Scene 2

feedback would be appreciated I hope you enjoy :)

https://youtu.be/sODRPFKPXmY?si=Pds_8Xa2XXKQEwnK

Maurice Vaughan

I like the animation and scene, Jason McArdle. I think some of the characters' movements could be smoother, mainly Tiatha. And maybe add more furniture and/or decorations to the throne room so it doesn't feel so empty.

Jason McArdle

Thank you Maurice Vaughan

Jason McArdle

Thank you Maurice Vaughan

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Jason McArdle.

Cyrus Sales

Jason McArdle - I would make sure the audio is mixed and balanced. The sound design and music takes away from what the character on screen are saying.

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