Hello Stage32 community. I'm excited, albeit, a bit nervous to be here. I'm a hobby writer, who recently was nudged to find myself a writing community and start turning some of my stories into screenplays. In searching for the right forum community, I found my way here to all of you. My niche is sci-fi, horror, and fantasy. I particularly love crafting stories that are left open ended, so I can come back and add more later. I look forward to sharing my first screenplay I wrote with you all, and getting some feedback from everyone! The logline (?) is: When a woman reaches out for help with strange events she suspects is alien, she learns that not everything is what it seems. You can read the story here on my google drive: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B8QkGQfuuvV6VEZ1ZjN5MDVIZTQ/view This is my first screenplay, any critiques, tips, and hints are welcome! :)
I should have mentioned... it's a 23 page read. Not too lengthy.
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Welcome Melonie!
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Welcome Melonie
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Thanks for the warm welcome everyone. I've been maneuvering around and figuring out the site. I'm sure already, I'm going to love it here.
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Welcome, Melonie! Great to have you!
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Welcome Melonie. I'd be happy to read your script and give you some notes, if you'd like.
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Welcome aboard Melonie. You'll love it here. I do.
Thanks Pierre! I'd love some feedback. A recently edited copy can be found at my log lines on my profile. I uploaded a pdf right here to Stage32. Seemed the thing to do. :)
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I reviewed the version on your logline page and I've just posted my notes to the same page. I hope they help.
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HI, Melonie! I am also a newbie, and excited to be a part of this community! Welcome aboard!