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Title: Sheroes
Logline:
Four ordinary women from diverse backgrounds are thrown together by chance when they stop a major crime. Their newfound fame propels them into a world of unexpected heroism, testing their mettle, friendships, and ideals as they confront villains, both external and internal.
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Happy New Year, Mark Deuce! I really like the title and concept! I think your logline could be tightened up. Here’s a logline template that might help: After/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (the main flaw that the protagonist has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality) _______ (the protagonist’s position/job/career) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/sets out to/fights/battles/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes).
You'd probably focus on the group instead of a protagonist since it's an ensemble story though.
Also, I think you could lead into the Superhero element more in the logline.